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Last Supper (Catfish Requiem)
This is one of a trio of poems, which attempt to tell a single story from three points of view. Last Supper(Catfish Requiem)Flies buzz and bite casting about for an afternoon meal.Air pregnant with...
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*{things you might consider cutting or tightening}Last Supper(Catfish Requiem) great use of titleFlies buzz and bitecasting {about} for an afternoon meal.Air pregnant with water-gills {would be...
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Thanks Kat..I thought I had pared this one back as far as it could go. I'll take careful consideration of your suggestions- extranneous verbage is annoying.The second and third movements are much...
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